Sunday, July 4, 2010

55 Fiction: Dolls

Blog Marathon Post 4

“Don’t go”, she said. He looked at her. She was teary-eyed. He wished he could do something about it. Instead he said, “I can’t even promise you that I will come back”. Just then, the shopkeeper took him and wrapped him in a glossy giftcover. He started his journey to make another little girl happy.

Authors Note: This is my first attempt at 55 fiction. While writing this I could understand how difficult it is to potray your thoughts in lesser words. But, if you can manage do that, how powerful it can be :)

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12 Comments:

At July 4, 2010 at 10:26 AM , Anonymous PB :) said...

Nice work in such few words ... As I said, u shud write more of such creative stuff :) ... Keep up the good work :)

 
At July 4, 2010 at 10:39 AM , Blogger Soorya said...

Good one! Waiting to see more :-)

 
At July 4, 2010 at 10:42 AM , Blogger Shyam said...

Small is beautiful and this work of yours supports that fact... excellent one Hima .. keep writing similar stuff :)

 
At July 5, 2010 at 4:39 AM , Blogger Dewdrop said...

@PB: Thanks a lot. I will try my hand at more creative stuff.
@Soorya: thanks. Keep reading.
@Shyam: thanks a lot.

 
At July 5, 2010 at 10:21 PM , Blogger Kishley said...

This is nice piece of writing :) I'm going to attempt one soon..

 
At July 5, 2010 at 10:53 PM , Blogger Madhu said...

A story in 55 words. Great!

 
At July 6, 2010 at 7:30 AM , Blogger aiby said...

tatz a good one - so u hav to count th words - I ain't good with maths :-)

 
At July 6, 2010 at 8:17 AM , Blogger Dewdrop said...

@Kishley: Thanks and welcome to the blog :)
@aiby: Thanks. I did count the words :)

 
At July 6, 2010 at 9:26 AM , Blogger Dewdrop said...

@madhu: Thanks :) Glad you liked it :)

 
At July 6, 2010 at 8:50 PM , Blogger Pratibha said...

I like it, its simple n cute! :)

 
At July 7, 2010 at 5:44 AM , Blogger Dewdrop said...

@pratibha: :) Thanks dear !!!

 
At July 15, 2010 at 5:12 PM , OpenID wannabauthor said...

hey gud one..enjoyed it thoroughly! :)

 

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