55 Fiction: Dolls
Blog Marathon Post 4
“Don’t go”, she said. He looked at her. She was teary-eyed. He wished he could do something about it. Instead he said, “I can’t even promise you that I will come back”. Just then, the shopkeeper took him and wrapped him in a glossy giftcover. He started his journey to make another little girl happy.
Authors Note: This is my first attempt at 55 fiction. While writing this I could understand how difficult it is to potray your thoughts in lesser words. But, if you can manage do that, how powerful it can be :)
Labels: 55 fiction, blog marathon, story
12 Comments:
Nice work in such few words ... As I said, u shud write more of such creative stuff :) ... Keep up the good work :)
Good one! Waiting to see more :-)
Small is beautiful and this work of yours supports that fact... excellent one Hima .. keep writing similar stuff :)
@PB: Thanks a lot. I will try my hand at more creative stuff.
@Soorya: thanks. Keep reading.
@Shyam: thanks a lot.
This is nice piece of writing :) I'm going to attempt one soon..
A story in 55 words. Great!
tatz a good one - so u hav to count th words - I ain't good with maths :-)
@Kishley: Thanks and welcome to the blog :)
@aiby: Thanks. I did count the words :)
@madhu: Thanks :) Glad you liked it :)
I like it, its simple n cute! :)
@pratibha: :) Thanks dear !!!
hey gud one..enjoyed it thoroughly! :)
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